Seven Heavens

Life on the go ❤️

A little bit of you

A little bit of me

A little bit of us in all you see

A Walking Timer

Each morning from the driver’s seat
A lady, I see briskly walking down the cobwebbed street

That’s how I know I’m close to seven in the morning
Every step she inches close to the crossing is my warning

Her face so flushed
in the pace of her feet’s rush

In ways strange at crossroads we meet
that’s where we decide each others speed

Will I ever know where she races to ?
at the same time when I make my way through

that empty lane with purple pansies prancing
and her steps compete with them dancing

On time I am if she is at the far end of the crossing
Else I know the gates of my office would be closing

Her jaded visage and pacing stride
In The Divine’s timing all is unified

Each morning from the driver’s seat
A lady, I see briskly walking down the cobwebbed street

@celina🕊️

14 responses to “A Walking Timer”

  1. This poem beautifully captures the subtle dance between routine and timing. The imagery of the “cobwebbed street” and “purple pansies prancing” adds a charming touch, while the interplay between your journey and the lady’s pace highlights a profound connection in the everyday. Lovely work!

    Liked by 2 people

  2. The rhythm of your words mirrors the steady pace of the morning routine you’ve captured.
    This poem captures the beauty in the mundane, reminding us to appreciate the small details of life and the unnoticed connections we make along the way. Thank you for sharing this moment in such a poetic and thoughtful way!👌🌷

    Liked by 1 person

  3. I’m deeply touched by your description of my poetry here. Yes it talks of some of those daily life experiences that leave us thinking.
    Thank you so much Zera for being kind enough to stop by, read and comment🙏

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Thank you so much for those insightful words. Deeply appreciate them as well as you taking out time to read my work here and continue supporting me. Means a lot 🙏 God bless you!! Have a Good day 👍

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Beautiful poem and imagery!🌸

    Liked by 3 people

  6. Thank you Sia ❤️

    Like

  7. I feel like the pace of the poem really matches the theme of timing. I really like it!

    Liked by 2 people

  8. Thank you so much Kymber ❣️

    Liked by 1 person

  9. A charming poem indeed with the proper sprinkling of purple paisleys, rosemary and thyme. And if her pace was not enough yours set the tone with each step along the way. Well done, Celina

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Thank you so much ☺️ God bless you !!

    Like

  11. Thank you so much GM. Rosemary and Thyme indeed should have been a part of this one. 😂😂😂 God bless you !! Peace ☮️

    Like

Leave a comment

Design a site like this with WordPress.com
Get started